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Homework Help: English

Posted by Henry on Sunday, March 4, 2012 at 11:56am.

These are other sentences I need you to check, Writeacher. Thank you.

1) Lady Macbeth was tired to be (better: of being ) just Lady Macbeth because she really wanted to be the queen (queen).
2) "Lady Macbeth is a very strong character because she ignored his husband advice and he set up for a murder: the Duncan's murder" .
3) Correction: Lady Macbeth is very determined and ignores her husband's doubts and hesitations about murdering Duncan.
4) "During a night Macbeth was very frightened because he didn't want kill Duncan, but he did it; otherwise Lady Macbeth would be very angry with him."
Correction: On the night of the murder Macbeth hesitates about whether to kill Duncan but his wife helps him to overcome his doubts.
5) "Elizabeth I managed to make England a seafaring and commercial power and a rich state.
"As a political weapon she never got married". Better: she never got married and used it as a political weapon to encourage the hopes of European princes.

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