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Posted by Zack on Sunday, March 4, 2012 at 11:18am.

Which sentence is better?

Warren had a newspaper business and was one of the United States Senate.

Warren had a newspaper business and he was one of the United States Senate.

Ela Help!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! - Ms. Sue, Sunday, March 4, 2012 at 12:14pm
The first sentence is better. However, it would be even better if you wrote: Warren had a newspaper business and was a United States Senator.
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