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Homework Help: English

Posted by Henry on Saturday, March 3, 2012 at 6:32pm.

Writeacher, could you please check if the corrections are OK? Thank you.

1)The hero usually has a period of doubt, in which he carries out his plan of vengeance.
2)The hero becomes more and more isolated and barely (I think "barely" doesn't mean anything here) gets mad (goes mad?) as the play develops.
3) The play within the play includes two audiences: the real one and the one on the stage made up of the actors.
4)The English fleet prevaied over the Spanish ships (better fleet) because they were (better the English sheeps) faster, lower, and armed with long-range guns.
5)In contrast, the Spanish ships were slow,heavy and armed with shortrange guns.
6)Lady Macbeth tries to overcome her husband's fears and hesitations by telling him that dead and sleeping people are like a painted devil (painted devils?) feared only by children.
7)There's always the appearance of a ghost which (or who?) asks the hero to avenge him.
You were expected to cover the ten lines.

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