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Incorrect sentence: The report considers important factors in choosing a medical facility, ratings of services at the urgent care center, reasons why HMO members do not use the center, and offers suggestions for increase in member usage.

I know this has parallelism problems. I have tried rewriting every way I can think of to correct it with no finished product.

Any help would be much appreciated.

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    Think about the sentence in list form ~

    The report considers
    - important factors in choosing a medical facility,
    - ratings of services at the urgent care center,
    - reasons why HMO members do not use the center, and
    - offers suggestions for increase in member usage.

    After "considers" each element of the series starts with what kind of word -- noun, verb, adjective, or what?

    Let me know and we'll go from there.

  • English - ,

    important is an adjective; ratings is a noun; reasons is a noun;offers is a verb.

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