Posted by Zero on Monday, February 27, 2012 at 11:07pm.
My parents always told me to brush my teeth morning and night, but it was not until high school that I actually realized why I did that. So imagine my parents learned from their school and encouraged me, but if a villager living in a shanty town does not know the importance of oral hygiene, how will his children learn? Who is there to teach them?. Becoming aware of oral diseases and their cause is the most important thing that the unfortunate community requires the most and suffers the greatest. Studying in the USA, I believe that I am not only getting an internationally recognized education, but also a thrifty one. My decision to study here will help me become independent. In addition, the money I save by studying here will eventually help me fulfill my life's dream: to open a free dental clinic with oral hygiene classes in Pakistan. Even with the proficiency in speaking and understanding Arabic, Urdu and English I have a passion to learn more languages. Including hearing people I also want to target the deaf community. Learning and understanding languages will make it easier for me to reach and aid the poverty struck communities in third world countries, and I will also be able to comfort regular patients to provide them with a successful dental treatment. Whether there is a lack of knowledge, language problems, a disability, poverty or just ignorance, the entirety of my aim is to educate and help these people. Oral/dental care, and in fact any kind of care is one's duty; however, if they are unaware, it is the educated people's responsibility to guide them before their ignorance causes them harm. Protecting oral hygiene can save one from costly diseases. With my clinic and language skills I want to make change in people's lives and their oral cavities. Attending this SMDEP will bring me closer to my selfless goal.
- Essay Check - Amanda Mosley, Monday, February 27, 2012 at 11:11pm
Ok so what exactly are you suppose to be looking for
- Essay Check - Ms. Sue, Monday, February 27, 2012 at 11:12pm
What is the purpose of this essay?
- Essay Check - Amanda Mosley, Monday, February 27, 2012 at 11:16pm
Thats what im wondering
- Essay Check - Zero, Monday, February 27, 2012 at 11:18pm
Sorry, this essay is for this diversity essay. We have to list out our goals.
I need some one to proof read and help me reconstruct some of the sentences.
- Essay Check - Amanda Mosley, Monday, February 27, 2012 at 11:27pm
Try to change your excessive usage of the word "i" and xheck your punctuation
- Essay Check - Zero, Monday, February 27, 2012 at 11:30pm
But this is a personal essay what do I use instead of I ?
- Essay Check - Amanda Mosley, Monday, February 27, 2012 at 11:36pm
The sentenc about hearing and deaf people you could put and i stead of i
- Essay Check - Amanda Mosley, Monday, February 27, 2012 at 11:40pm
I meant to
Say replace i with and
- Essay Check - Zero, Monday, February 27, 2012 at 11:56pm
That sentence then does not make any sense.
- Essay Check - Ms.sue, Monday, February 27, 2012 at 11:59pm
Ok you dont need anything added
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