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December 22, 2014

Homework Help: english

Posted by jon on Wednesday, February 22, 2012 at 11:54pm.

Hi is my thesis statement clear in the following paragraph, if nto how can i make it clearer. Basically I want to show that music programs can positively impact a students education, so music programs shouldn't be cut. Also should I keep out all the standardized test score information?

The result of standardized test scores is an important issue regarding the educational systems across the United States. These tests help a school evaluate how studentís in a given class, district or school perform compared to other students. Theyíre used as a way to measure skills and abilities of students. Studies have shown that those who participate in music may see more of an increase in their test scores compared to those who donít participate in music. So why is it then that music programs are being cut?

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