English - Ms. Sue
posted by Aaron on .
For my slideshow I had wrote down - - Jake draws away from everyone. But corrected it to withdraw, so would that be like - -Jake withdraws away from everyone, or Jake withdraws from everyone?
I also wrote - - to act positive and move on, but she corrected me and said positively. So would that be - -to act positively and move on? Is there another way I could reword this because Animoto won't let me add more letters. I was thinking ... Be positive and move forward, not sure if that sounds good.
This is better: Jake withdraws from everyone.
This is very good: Be positive and move forward.
Thanks a lot Ms. Sue =)
Actually Act positively and move forward also fits, does it make sense?
Yes, your last statement is also good and makes sense.
You're welcome, Aaron.