Homework Help: writing

Posted by Ricky on Sunday, February 19, 2012 at 8:40pm.

I want to know what is wrong in the following sentence:
After six months on the job, he faced problems in his first recruitment effort; however, if he solves these problems, the new hires should be able to start working by July.

writing - Writeacher, Sunday, February 19, 2012 at 8:47pm
You have switched verb tenses.
writing - Writeacher, Sunday, February 19, 2012 at 8:48pm
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/consistency.htm
writing - Alison, Sunday, February 19, 2012 at 9:56pm
hires sounds a little awkward. i think hirees should be placed in there instead of hires

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