Homework Help: Writing

Posted by Nina on Sunday, February 19, 2012 at 3:50pm.

I'm Writing a Discursive Essay on the topic "is it more difficult to be a young person today then it was 50years ago", I have these main points: "we have technology but its brought us media pressue" "Better education system but with more pressue to succed" "Medical Breakthrought but increased diseases" I agree that its harder being a young person today. I've used this as my introduction "Being a young Person Today is easier in some sense and harder in some sense as we may have more freedom, resources,technology but all this has come with much more responsibilities that we have to deal with" can you improve it or help me put it in a better way using my main puts.

Writing - Ms. Sue, Sunday, February 19, 2012 at 4:13pm
You have some good ideas.

Now you need to write a thesis sentence. I recommend you follow these suggestions.

http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html

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