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Homework Help: English- evaluating essay

Posted by Taylor on Tuesday, February 14, 2012 at 3:06pm.

I have write a evaluation essay on the movie Troop 1500. So my thesis is -Taking daughters to see their mothers in jail should be a program of it's own.-
I don't know if my topic sentence is correct:

One reason a program should be made separate for daughters who want to reconnect with their mothers is because not all girls want or is prepared to see their mothers.

The next reason there should be a separate program for daughters who want to reconnect with their mothers is it puts too much responsiblity on the girls and girl scouts.

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