If you have time to do only a light revision, you should ask yourself all of the following questions, EXCEPT:

Are the first and last paragraphs effective?

Are numbers correct? (*)

Does the design of the document make it easy for readers to get the information they need?

Is each sentence clear?

if you were to revise a document three times, which of the following is something you would not be looking for in the final revision

you-attitude
positive emphasis
style and tone (*)
layout

I agree with your answers.