Posted by sharon on Tuesday, January 31, 2012 at 9:25am.
Thesis: Using confederate flags and swastikas to protect the freedom of expression should not be allowed because of the controversy that it causes among students on campus.
It's a thesis statement because your opinion is in there ("should not be allowed"), but it's not very strong. Take a good look at the 5th example here:
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html
How can you make your thesis stronger and more specific?
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