Posted by Cindy on Friday, January 27, 2012 at 2:39pm.
Run-on -- Opening to the right upper lobe was inspected, however 2 areas of abnormality were detected.
How will you fix it?
Unneeded comma in here -- All 3 anterior, posterior, and apical, segments were visualized without any obstruction noted.
Which one will you remove?
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