I urgently need to write a short email to a scholar specialized in Comenius projects.

After presenting myself and the school I'd like to include this:

1) As you are a scholar with an in-depth knowledge of Clil within a Comenius project, I would like to have your personal opinion on the partnership of our school with these two other European schools.
2) Do you think our science topic is too limited and therefore fails to adhere to European standards?
3) Do you believe we should find an English-speaking partner willing to join the project, which could help us build a science vocabulary?
4) I wonder if you could help us find a suitable English high school which may be interested in working on such a project.
5) I thank you very much for cooperating with us. We would be pleased/honoured if you could hold a lecture on Clil at our school.

What is "Clil"?

Delete the word "personal" in #1; it's redundant.

#4. Could you help us find... ?

Everything else is fine.

Subject: Inquiry regarding Comenius Project Partnership and Lecture Request

Dear [Scholar's Name],

I hope this email finds you well. My name is [Your Name], and I am writing on behalf of [Your School Name]. We are currently involved in a Comenius project and have heard about your expertise and extensive knowledge in the field of Clil within Comenius projects. We would greatly appreciate your input and guidance regarding our partnership with two other European schools.

1) First and foremost, we value your opinion as a scholar with in-depth knowledge of Clil within Comenius projects. We would like to hear your personal perspective on the partnership of our school with these two other European schools. Any insights you can offer will be crucial in making informed decisions on the direction and effectiveness of our collaboration.

2) We would also like to seek your professional advice on our science topic. Is it too limited in scope, and does it adhere to European standards? Your expertise would help us ensure that our project aligns with the expectations and goals set by the European community.

3) Additionally, we are considering the possibility of finding an English-speaking partner school to join our project. The inclusion of such a partner could greatly enhance our students' science vocabulary. We would appreciate your input on this matter and any suggestions you may have for potential English-speaking schools that might be interested in collaborating with us.

4) In line with the previous point, we would be grateful if you could assist us in finding a suitable English high school that may show interest in participating in this project. Your network and connections within the educational community would be invaluable in helping us establish a fruitful partnership.

5) Last but not least, we would like to express our gratitude for your cooperation. It would be an honor for us if you could consider holding a lecture on Clil at our school. Your expertise in this field would be highly beneficial to both our students and staff, and we would greatly appreciate your valuable insights.

Once again, thank you for considering our inquiry. We eagerly await your response and look forward to the possibility of collaboration. Please feel free to reach out to us if you require any further information or clarification.

Best regards,

[Your Name]
[Your Position/Title]
[Your School Name]
[Contact Information]