Posted by Blaze on Wednesday, January 18, 2012 at 6:35pm.
It's much too wordy. I doubt if it accurately tells what the paper is about.
http://writingcenter.unc.edu/resources/handouts-demos/writing-the-paper/thesis-statements
LOL - what particular age?
I am 74 and get a lot of my news on the internet, a little on the car radio, local news from local paper (but often the online edition), and TV only if it happens to be on at a restaurant where I am eating.
I used to get most of my news from the newspaper and radio. (TV and internet did not exist)
So I agree with your hypothesis.
Sorry I wasn't trying to be offensive.. I asked my grandparents and they told me ways they consumed the news back in the day and how drastically different it is now.. That's why i said that
I am not offended. You are doing just fine.
You should probably say "people of the age of my grandparents" (probably similar to my age).
maybe something like:
The internet and TV have largely replaced newspapers and radio as news sources for my grandparents.
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