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odd question...

"I longingly gazed at my tan lined ring finger, and somehow knew: he’s proud."

i am trying to edit that sentance, does it make sense? As in does the grammar make it flow?

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    It doesn't make any sense. What are you trying to say?

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    It is out of context. I actually makes sense in the story :P but does the "tan lined ring finger" make sense? I feel like they should have a "-" between them.... like "tan-lined" or "ring-finger"

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