Yes, it's good, although there are a few small mistakes.
I'll go over it again and then I'll post it here to see if it's good.
Btw thanks I worked really hard on this assignment.
You're welcome. It shows that you worked hard on this assignment. :-)
My teacher gave us a formate and we fill it out (and we can pick one of the 13 colonies). So I choose Massachusetts. So after I finish the formate my Social Studies teacher said that we have to put it in our own words.
Dear (ss teacher's name),
Hi! How are you? I'm having a wonderful time of my life here in Massachusetts. Massachusetts is part of the New English colonies just to let you know. In addition, the religion of Massachusetts is the Puritans. The founder of Massachusetts, John Winthrop says that anyone who comes to live here will lead a very successful life. You should really come and join me. There are some wonderful things about Massachusetts that you should know. You'll be impress!
We can make money in several ways in Massachusetts. For example, we shipbuilding goods. Another way we make money is by exporting tobacco to England. As you can see there are many ways to live a good life in Massachusetts.
Our government in Massachusetts is very different from England's. Only white male property owners/church members can choose who they want their leaders to be. Can you believe that? I think that's great! There are so many opportunities here to take advantage of. By the way, by 1720 only Christian men over the age 21 who owned property could vote so for now women can't vote.
The education is also very different here than in England. We have public schools, apprentice and Dame schools for girls. Apprentice is learned a trade or craft from a master. That's sound interesting!
I can't tell you how happy my family and I are living in Massachusetts. It has truly been a blessing to have been able to make a life here. I hope you could join me and explorer how wonderful Massachusetts really is! Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
it is good now???
I change some mistakes.
thank you! :)
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