I just emailed this to Mme (SraJMcginn).
Thank you :). It's not complete yet, though. This is only half of my story.
I don't know if Sra will have time to proof your whole story. But she'll respond to you later.
Alright, thanks again!
If the twins are both boys = Bienvenus
Même s'ils sont les mêmes...différents
talented = doué
everything he wanted = tout ce qu'il voulait
a été abandonné = has been abandoned?
Philippe ne pouvait pas...son journal = his?
Il a ouvert la porte....content (masc. not fem.)...qui il a vu
une jolie fille de son âge
dans les mains (parts of body use definite article when you're sure whose hands they are)
lui a dit à Philippe qu'elle
Quand elle l'a ouvert...à qui il appartient
poèmes intéressants (watch gender = check the dictionary)
Je suis désolée (she is feminine. All adjectives have the same number (singular/plural) and gender (masc. or fem.) as the noun(s) modified
(désolé should use the Subjunctive, but I don't know the level of French you are in)
Elle pensait que Philippe...talented = doué or talentueux
je le voudrais.
Brielle a remarqué
Il dit (it = the sign) écrivains = spelling
Écrivez (spelling) = write to yourself? Not reflexive)
Philippe ne pensait pas qu'il
Brielle a dit = you began in the past so stay in the past)
Sra (aka Mme)
Thank you so much! :) I REALLY appreciate it. I'm terrible at french so i'm glad you took the time to help me out.
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