posted by SHARON on .
I am trying these on my own is this correct?
1.The service contract...on the whole...applied to upgrade. rewrite: Don't understand this sentence
2.All of our costs were within fair-guidelines. rewrite: All the cost were within the guidelines.
3.Al the lots we are selling offer a relatively easy access to the lake.Rewrite : All of the lots we are selling have easy access to the lake.