Homework Help: English

Posted by Henry2 on Tuesday, January 10, 2012 at 9:04am.

I urgently need you to check these sentences for my Comemius project!!!
I know it is long but what I need to say is quite complicated. I really hope you can help me.
Tell me what you think of the project.

1) I'm terribly sorry I didn't manage to write you before but I've been very busy both at school and at home.
2) Actually, I'm not going through a very nice time since my child has just recovered from a bad flu and my has nearly lost her voice and is going to be operated on her vocal cords next week.
3) By the waw, our science teachers have decided to meet tomorrow to better define the theme and objectives of the project and would like to know a few more things before our preliminary meeting.
4) First, do you still think the project should concern mainly the biodiversity in water and other waterways? Do you believe our physics teachers should be involved in the project as well?
5) Some of our science teachers would like to involve a whole second class of students instead of single students selected from different second classes.

English - I luv english, Tuesday, January 10, 2012 at 9:15am
1) I'm terribly sorry that I didn't manage to write you earlier but I've been very busy both at school and home.
2) Actually, I'm going through a bad time since my child had just recovered from a bad flu and had nearly lost her voice. Her vocal cord are going to be operated on next week.
3) By the way, our Science teachers have decided to meet tomorrow to better define the theme and objectives of the project.They would like to know a few more things before the preliminary meeting.
4) Firstly, do you still think the project should concentrate mainly on the biodiversity in water and other waterways? Do you believe our Physics teachers should be involved in the project as well?
5) Some of our Science teachers would like to involve a second group of students instead of individual students selected from different classes.
English - Writeacher, Tuesday, January 10, 2012 at 9:36am
Do NOT capitalize the S on "science" unless that is a specific name of a course, such as Physical Science 2. The general reference (such as in your sentences) should not have the capital S.

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