February 26, 2017

Homework Help: English

Posted by Henry2 on Thursday, January 5, 2012 at 7:25am.

Thank you very much for your corrections!
Here are some more sentences I need you to revise.

1)There is the appearance of a ghost which urges the hero to commit the revenge. (Correction: to avenge, get/have/take revenge on Claudius/to seek revenge for his own murder).
2)A violent crime made to the hero’s family. (Correction: A violent crime has been committed/was committed against a member of the hero’s family.)
3)Hamlet has a period of doubts in which he carries out his plan of revenge (is “vengeance”) possible?
The hero has a close relationship with the audience through the asides. There is a lot of bloody action and a lot of deaths occur throughout the play. (There are many bloody actions is possible??)
4)The ghost of the previous king, Hamlet’s father, appears to Hamlet.
5)The most particular thing (correction: the main feature?) of the play-within-the-play is that it is formed from two audiences: one is the real audience, the other is the one on stage.

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