Would someone please check my work. Thank you.
Rewrite each sentence in an active voice
1) Mistakes were made.
A)He made mistakes.
2) Musical legends such as Ray Charles, Billie Holiday, and Johnny Cash have all influenced Norah Jones
A)Norah Jones was influenced by musical legends such as Ray Charles, Billie Holiday, and Johnny Cash.
3) Numerous reports of loud music from bars and shouting neighbors were taken by the city’s new noise complaint hotline.
A)The city’s new noise complaint hotline took numerous reports of loud music from bars and shouting neighbors.
4) The violin solo was performed by an eight-year-old.
A)An eight-year-old performed the violin solo.
5) In a patient with celiac disease, intestinal damage can be caused by the body’s immunological response to gluten.
A)A body’s immunological response to gluten can cause intestinal damage in a patient with celiac disease.
ENGLISH - Ms. Sue, Monday, December 26, 2011 at 6:14pm
2) The original sentence is in the active voice.