Shall I replace "you" with "people" or "we"? Thank you.

1.This newspaper article is about job satisfaction. It claims that the root of job satisfaction lies in people's attitude and expectations.
2) First, it is essential to consider the kind of approach to work people have.
It is believed that there are three basic approaches to work depending on whether we are working at a job, a career or a passion.
3) If we work at a career, the prospect of promotion and development opportunities are what appeals us most to our job.
4) If we work at a passion, it is the work itself that determines our motivation and satisfaction. Finally, if we work at a job, then it is the financial aspect that matters us most. 5) Job satisfaction is probably a mixture of the above-mentioned approaches.

Replacing with "people" or "a person" is excellent.

1. OK

2. First, it is essential to consider the kind of approach to work people have. It is believed that there are three basic approaches to work depending on whether a person is working at a job, a career, or a passion.

3. If a person works at a career, the prospect of promotion and development opportunities are the most appealing.

4. If a person works at a passion, it is the work itself that determines his or her motivation and satisfaction. Finally, if a person works at a job, then it is the financial aspect that matters most.

5. OK

You have the option to replace "you" with either "people" or "we" depending on the context and the intended meaning of the statement. Let's break down each sentence to understand the use of pronouns:

1) In this sentence, the article is discussing the general concept of job satisfaction. Here, "people's attitude and expectations" refers to the attitude and expectations of individuals as a whole. So, you can replace "people" with "we" to make it more inclusive and relatable to yourself.

2) The sentence mentions different approaches to work - job, career, and passion. Since it is a general statement about different individuals, using "people" would be more appropriate. So, you can replace "we" with "people".

3) This sentence describes the perspective of someone who works at a career. It talks about what appeals to the individual in their job. Since it specifically refers to the person working at a career, using "us" would be more suitable. So, you can replace "we" with "us".

4) Here, the sentence discusses the perspective of someone working at a passion. It mentions that the work itself determines their motivation and satisfaction. Since it is referring to people in general who work at a passion, using "us" would be better. So, you can replace "we" with "us".

5) This sentence concludes by stating that job satisfaction is likely a combination of the three approaches discussed earlier. It refers to the general idea of job satisfaction and can include everyone. Therefore, using "people" would be more appropriate. So, you can replace "we" with "people".