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I need to double check my work please.

Revise to create pronoun-antecedent agreement and eliminate the generic he and any awkward pronoun reference.

1) While shopping for a new computer for school, I noticed that a laptop costs much less then they use to.
A) While shopping for a new computer for school, I noticed that a laptop costs much less then it use to.

2) Congress usually resists a president’s attempt to encroach on what they consider their authority.
A) Congress usually resists a president’s attempt to encroach on what is considered their authority.

3) Macro and Ellen were each given a chance to voice their opinion.
A) Macro and Ellen were given a chance to voice their opinion.

4) An emergency room doctor needs to be swift and decisive; he also needs to be calm and careful.
A) An emergency room doctor needs to be swift and decisive; while also being calm and careful.

5) Every dog and cat has their own personality.
A) Dogs and cats have their own personality.

  • English - ,

    All are correct.

    Note, though the following corrections:

    1. used to (not use to)

    3. their opinions

  • English - ,

    And in 1, it's "than" not "then."

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