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Rephrase the following sentences:
1) Hamlet is debating whether it is better to act or to abstain from action.
2) Hamlet is wondering (or he wonders?) whether it is better to act or not to act.
3) He wonders whether it is better to fight against fate or to surrender to it.
4) He wonders whether it is better to make a stand against fate or to give in (??) to it.
5) Death would be preferable to life's suffering if man was not scared by the thought of what there may be beyond it.
6) Death would be more desirable than earthly sorrow if man was not afraid by (?) the thought of an afterlife.
7) It is this that makes cowards of men and takes away the will to act.
8) It is the fear of something after death that makes us hesitate and prevents man from acting.

Choose the 5 or fewer that you question the most.

Here are the rephrased sentences:

1) Whether to act or refrain from action is a subject of debate for Hamlet.
2) Hamlet contemplates whether it is better to act or not to act.
3) He ponders whether it is preferable to resist fate or surrender to it.
4) He contemplates whether it is better to defy fate or yield to it.
5) If the fear of the unknown did not frighten man, death would be the preferred option to endure life's suffering.
6) If man was not afraid of the possibility of an afterlife, death would be more desirable than earthly sorrow.
7) The fear-induced hesitation and loss of will to act is what makes cowards out of men.
8) It is the apprehension of what may happen after death that causes hesitation and prevents man from taking action.

To check these sentences for correctness, you can consider the following:
- Grammar: Ensure that the sentence structure is correct and that there are no grammatical errors, such as subject-verb agreement or incorrect word usage.
- Clarity: Make sure the sentences are clear and convey the intended meaning.
- Coherence: Ensure that the ideas flow logically and are connected in a coherent manner.
- Referencing the original context: Check that the rephrased sentences accurately convey the meaning of the original sentences.