Posted by jon on Sunday, December 11, 2011 at 1:23am.
I meant choose* not chose by the way.
Although there are many events and people that have had great effects on western civilization, Constantine the Great was a figure who stands out.
1. Making the introductory clause positive rather than negative works better.
2. "the rule of Constantine" was not a figure.
Yeh that's why i said Constantine the Great, but what do you mean by your first statement. How would I change the sentence then?
Please reread what I posted. I changed your sentence.
Sorry I'm half asleep, thanks.
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