Where do Harry Potter live, when he not are together with all his friends at Hogwarts? He lives with his uncle and aunt in Privet Drive. They do not belong to the magic world, they don’t like Harry, and he does certainly not like them too. Harry loves Ron’s family, and Ron’s mother says, that Harry should come and live with them in the holidays. Why did he always spend his holidays with his ugly and snubbed family? In one of the other books are we told, that their home is the only place outside Hogwarts, where Harry can be safe for Lord Voldemort.

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Where do(1) Harry Potter live,(2) when he not are together with all his friends at Hogwarts? He lives with his uncle and aunt in Privet Drive. They do not belong to the magic world,(3) they don’t like Harry, and he does certainly not like them too(4). Harry loves Ron’s family, and Ron’s mother says,(2) that Harry should come and live with them in(4) the holidays. Why did he always spend his holidays with his ugly and snubbed family? In one of the other books are we(5) told,(2) that their home is the only place outside Hogwarts,(2) where Harry can be safe for Lord Voldemort.

(1) subject-verb agreement error
(2) punctuation NOT needed
(3) run-on
(4) incorrect word choice
(5) incorrect word order

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Sure! To find the rest of the mistakes, it might be helpful to review the given information and compare it to your knowledge of the Harry Potter series. Here's a breakdown of the information provided and the corrections needed:

1. Correction 1: Harry Potter lives with his aunt and uncle, not just his uncle, in Privet Drive.
2. Correction 2: While it is true that Harry's relatives, the Dursleys, are not fond of him, it is not accurate to say that he does not like them. Harry generally dislikes their treatment and the way they mistreat him, but he does not harbor personal animosity towards them.
3. Correction 3: Harry loves Ron's family, the Weasleys, and often spends time with them during school holidays. However, it is not explicitly mentioned that Ron's mother, Molly Weasley, invites Harry to live with them permanently.
4. Correction 4: Harry does not always spend his holidays with the Dursleys willingly. In the earlier books, Harry must return to Privet Drive during his summer breaks because of a specific protective enchantment placed on him by his mother's sacrifice. As mentioned, it is the only place outside of Hogwarts where he is safe from Lord Voldemort.
5. Correction 5: The precise reason why Harry has to stay with the Dursleys during the summer is not explicitly stated in any of the books. However, it is revealed that due to his mother's protection, which resides in his blood and the house of his relatives, Harry is shielded from Voldemort while he calls Privet Drive home.

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