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Homework Help: English

Posted by Henry2 on Tuesday, December 6, 2011 at 6:26pm.

I left out the following sentences. Could you please check them?

1) Colin decided to try to become a real eco-warrior and reduce his family's impact on the environment (I need a synonym for impact).
2) For one year in his familiy there wasn't a TV or a fridge, they used one electric light to save electricity.
3) They didn't buy any factory-made bottles of shampoo, rolls of toilet paper or bars of soap. They either made them or used alternatives instead.
4) They also tried to create less rubbish and use less fuel. They travelled by bicycle and bought second-hand things for their apartment.
5) They carried food in baskets instead of (rather than??) plastic bags. They avoided takeaway food so they didn't didn't have to throw away all the containers that it comes (came in?).
6) Though the experiment was tough, when they finished it they were fitter, happier and a little bit wiser.

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