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Posted by jon on Monday, December 5, 2011 at 8:09pm.

Is this a good thesis statement?

Filth is characterized by dirt, foul language, and corrupt conditions. Baldwin personifies the meaning of filth through Gabriel’s character and his actions brilliantly.

english - SraJMcGin, Monday, December 5, 2011 at 8:16pm
You might want to put "brilliantly" after "personifies" as the adverb goes with that verb.

Sra
english - jon, Monday, December 5, 2011 at 8:33pm
thanks!

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