Homework Help: english

Posted by jon on Monday, December 5, 2011 at 6:54pm.

Hi, I have another question about a sentence in my paper. Does this sound alright?

Immigrants envisioned and anticipated America to be an answer to their problems but what they got instead was a world filled with filth.

English - Ms. Sue, Monday, December 5, 2011 at 6:55pm
Yes, that's correct.

Be sure to put a comma after problems.

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