Posted by jon on Monday, December 5, 2011 at 6:05pm.
You need to change it. The word "grandeur" is a noun, and you've used it as an adjective modifying "lifestyle."
http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/grandeur
Find an adjective that expresses a similar idea.
Would it just be better if i said:
They expected a lifestyle filled with endless opportunities to be successful and happy.
You could do it that way. Or you could use "grandiose" (an adjective) to modify "lifestyle."
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