I just wanted to know how you would evalute these sentences, which are part of an essay.

1) "The monologue is when the actor is alone on the stage and he gets speaking while the soliloque is when there are some actors and one gets speaking as something he is thinking about."

2) You wrote a number of disconnected sentences which don’t make sense at all.
Study my notes carefully and then rewrite your paragraphs correctly.
The use of the syntax is in most cases wrong. Some words are misspelt or don’t make sense at all.

1. I'd have the student revise this sentence because "gets speaking" is not standard phrasing. I'd also want the student to check all spelling. And finally, I'd have the student tell me what kind of sentence this is (simple, compound, complex, or what?) and what punctuation it needs.

2. If these 3 sentences are supposed to flow and be coherent altogether, I'd have the student revise for smoothness, making sure there are no disconnections. I'd also have the student check for proper punctuation.

1) The first sentence is a bit unclear and contains some incorrect terminology. To evaluate it, we can identify the following issues:

- The use of "monologue" and "soliloque" is incorrect. The correct terms are "monologue" and "soliloquy." A monologue is a speech delivered by one character alone on the stage, while a soliloquy is a type of monologue where the character reveals their inner thoughts and emotions.

- The phrase "he gets speaking" is grammatically incorrect. It should be "he starts speaking" or "he begins speaking."

To improve the sentence, we could rewrite it as follows: "A monologue occurs when an actor is alone on stage and delivers a speech, while a soliloquy is a specific type of monologue where the character speaks their inner thoughts aloud."

2) The second excerpt seems to be a critique of someone's writing. To evaluate it, we can identify the following issues:

- The sentence structure is disjointed, making it difficult to understand the intended meaning.

- The syntax (sentence structure and word order) is mostly incorrect. The writer suggests that the person's use of syntax is problematic.

- The writer also mentions misspelled words or nonsensical words in the text.

To address these issues, the writer is advising the person to carefully study their notes and rewrite their paragraphs correctly. It is important to pay attention to proper sentence structure, spelling, and syntax to ensure coherence and clarity in writing.