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Posted by Help! on Saturday, December 3, 2011 at 3:04am.

need help with my Juggling topic.I got 6/20 and I want to get the full 20 points! Thanks!Such as thesis, Introduction.

Thesis: The purpose of my speech is to inform my audience about my experience with juggling; more specifically how I became involved with juggling.

I have to break down my main points but I dont know other two to add as juggling experience. I have to have I, II & III...so far I have one which is "How I became involved with juggling."

Introduction: Have you ever indugled yourself in a hobby that captured your imagination, interests and kept you occupied? Well, I did. Juggling has been my passion, it provides me unique way to learn escape. Ever since, I was a little girl and lived in my native country; I loved juggling and juggled with different objects.

In there Introduction, I have to accomplish 3 purpose which are Motivation, Forecast and Orientation. Please, tell me how to include this in the intorduction..thanks!

English - Writeacher, Friday, December 2, 2011 at 1:23pm

How did your teacher score the 6/20? I can help you better if I know what he/she is looking for.

For example, I don't think you have written a true thesis statement, but without knowing what your teacher wants, I can't be sure.

English - Saahre, Friday, December 2, 2011 at 5:48pm

Ok, thanks! First she said that I did not have good thesis statement. For instance, I have to have 3 main points which i'll be giving speech about in my thesis. In the thesis statement so far I only have one which is "how I became involved with juggling."

Thesis: The purpose of my speech is to inform my audience about my experience with juggling; more specifically how I became involved with juggling. This is how she wants to be written except she wants me to include othe two experiences i had with juggling.

For instance.

I. I'll be talking about "How I became invloved with juggling.

II & III. I dont kow what to talk about and she wants to know what will i'll for those two which I need help with. I, II & III had to be stated in the thesis but I only have I so far.

What are some of the experince with juggling I should talk about besides how became involved with juggling?


Also, She said, I got the conclusion right but I dont have the 3 purpose which are Motivation, Forecast and Orientation. Please, tell me how to include this in the intorduction..thanks! What are these please. So much questions but I really need help, thanks!

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