February 23, 2017

Homework Help: english

Posted by zuz on Tuesday, November 29, 2011 at 10:41am.


I need help fixing my grammar in the following:

I'm going to tell you a story about a rabbit, and a turtle running a race. One sunny day the rabbit was running fast, and hopping around quickly showing off as usual; you know how rabbits are but the slow turtle can hardly even move around.
I guess the only time turtles run fast is when they go after insects.
So, on that sunny day the rabbit was begging to run a race with the turtle. The turtle disagreed because he knew the rabbit was way faster than HE is.

The rabbit convinced the turtle to race. The turtle said he will mark out where the race will be.
The rabbit agreed and said, "Tell me right away when you plan the race."

The turtle said" ok am going to plan the race with my friends, and ill let you know tomorrow morning."

Rabbit said, "all right."

After a while the turtle gathered his friends to plan the race.
They decided to cheat that fast rabbit to win. They said'' let's run the race all of us and take short cuts.
They said we will run the race over the mound and on top of the hill.

They told the rabbit the next day that the race will be over the mound and on top of the hill, and he agreed.

But the turtles all gathered to chat.
They picked out four turtles to cheat that fast rabbit. The decided that in each round a turtle will be hiding so, on the start line the first turtle will run then hide and the other two also hide and the fourth will hide close to the finish line.

When the race started the rabbit jumped and leaped and pasted the first rabbit.
He jumped and leaped then the second rabbit came out from the plants it was hiding in when the rabbit came closer he was amused, and asked the turtle how he got here the turtle answered, "Oh am still running am still running."

The rabbit pasted the second turtle. The second turtle hided back as the rabbit passed him.
The rabbit took a break to eat, and drink water then started running again. He found the third turtle ahead of him.
The rabbit was shocked and asked the rabbit, " how did you pass me?!"

The turtle answered, "Ooh, I'm still running."
The rabbit passed the third rabbit it rushed to his final round.
But that turtle was waiting there and when the poor rabbit came he noticed it was too late and saw the turtle ahead of him.
The rabbit got angry because he was sure he didn’t see that turtle passing him and said, "How did you get here?"
The turtle replied, "I ran to the finish line".

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