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Homework Help: world history

Posted by Fort on Tuesday, November 29, 2011 at 6:53am.

Need Thesis help for essay on....this is the question being answered:
Prompt: Hinduism, Confucianism and Buddhism are three of the world’s great belief systems. Compare and contrast their impact on the societies that embraced them.

I started this thesis, but am trying to make it better and need help with ending.....

Thesis: Although Hinduism, Confucianism and Buddhism are three of the world’s great belief systems, each greatly impacted the social, political and religious life of their countries of origin, as well as the countries to which they spread. While all three belief systems were vital to the social and religious life of their countries, both Hinduism and Confucianism imposed political social order, whereas Buddhism stressed importance on ……??.....

I'm unsure how to say that Buddhism didn't have a political impact like Confucianism and Hinduism did. Please help fix my thesis to match the prompt.

I need help making a good thesis for this essay. Thank you.

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