Posted by jake on Thursday, November 24, 2011 at 1:44am.
This is how I would word it:
It was filled with lies, corruption, and betrayal keeping me at the edge of my seat.
Alright thanks!
You're welcome.
... it's fine ... if you put a comma after "betrayal"
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