February 25, 2017

Homework Help: English

Posted by Ruth on Sunday, November 13, 2011 at 1:10pm.

My task is to write a persuasive article for my chool website about an issue related to school meals.

My title is 'Unhealthy heaven'
My sub-heading is 'Those hungry humans crave for tasty foods. What will it be?'

My introduction's main point is that ' School healthy meals aren't as affective or succesful as we'd like them to be.'

Below is my introduction. Please suggest if firstly, my introduction ties in with the title and main point and sub-heading, secondly if i have used persuasive tecniques effectively and thirdly any grammatical mistakes or any additions etc.

If you had a choice between a delicious,heavenly hamburger and a vegetable sapless salad, which would you choose? We are unfortunately inclined to choose the unhealthier option as it's more tastier.

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