Hi;

Just wondering if my grammar looks good.:)

Some people find fables to be a negative thing because they are clearer then what they would actually be in reality.
Like they teach children that the good always win or gain the good thing.
I disagree with this view point because morals give us consequences of things.
yeah maybe good don't always win in life but being responsible, and a good person can really effect the environment, and the people around us.
Like if I keep lying to people they will take a negative view on me and will basically never believe what I say. If I don’t plan my work correctly it can damage my work and wont give me the grade I want. That is what fables teach us.
I think fables teach us values more than actually having a negative impact on us.

I think fables always give positive impacts on children. I really think teaching them to children is a positive thing. Fables don’t waste the child’s' time to just distract them in something. No, they can give the child these lessons that will frame in his/her personality, and will be carried on in life.
The child will take these lessons and will pass them on to their children as they grow to make this world a more positive, and peaceful world. Fables teach us many values we need to make this a better world . Like they teach us honesty, caring, responsibility, not to judge people on how they look.
We need these lessons to form a more peaceful environment. That is why I think fables are a positive thing to teach to children.

This looks like your later post, which I saw and corrected first.

Sra

Your grammar looks generally good, but there are a few areas where you can make some improvements:

1. Sentence structure: Some of your sentences could be clearer and more concise. For example, instead of saying "Like they teach children that the good always win or gain the good thing," you can say "They teach children that good always wins or gains positive outcomes."

2. Subject-verb agreement: In the sentence "Yeah maybe good don't always win in life," the subject "good" should be singular, so it should be "Yeah, maybe good doesn't always win in life."

3. Punctuation: Make sure to use proper punctuation, such as commas and periods, to separate your thoughts and make your writing easier to read. For example, instead of "Fables don’t waste the child’s' time to just distract them in something," it should be "Fables don't waste the child's time; instead, they provide valuable lessons."

Here's the revised version of your text, incorporating these suggestions:

"Some people find fables to be a negative thing because they present a clearer version of reality than what actually happens. They teach children that good always wins or gains positive outcomes. However, I disagree with this viewpoint because fables provide us with moral lessons that demonstrate the consequences of our actions.

While it is true that good doesn't always win in life, being responsible and a good person can have a positive impact on the environment and the people around us. For instance, if I consistently lie to people, they will view me negatively and never believe what I say. Similarly, if I fail to plan my work correctly, it can damage my performance and prevent me from achieving the desired results. These are the lessons that fables aim to teach us.

I believe that fables have a positive impact on children. They don't simply distract them; instead, they provide valuable lessons that shape their personalities and guide them in life. Children carry these lessons with them and pass them on to future generations, contributing to a more positive and peaceful world. Fables teach us important values such as honesty, caring, responsibility, and not judging people based on appearance. These lessons are essential for creating a more peaceful environment. That is why I consider fables to be a positive tool for teaching children."