and frame the child's character (change what you have)
another change from the adjective "characteristic" to the noun "character."
Paragraph 2 = you need a verb =
"impact on children because" = IS because
Capitalize: Little Red Riding Hood (a character's name)
change "a important" to "an important"
secure is an adjective which you need to change to the noun - security
other people's security (possessive)
Little Red Riding Hood
Actually, the subject itself is a pet peeve of mine -- the misuse of "if" when "whether" should be used.
Waxing pedantic, I'd have to say that as written, you'll only be checking "if the grammar is proper." If it's not, you won't check.
thank you so so much :))))
Can you write an article to be include in the next issue of the magazine?
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