Hi;

I was wondering if my grammar looks good.

Thank you

I think teaching fables to children is a positive thing because fables teach children valuable lessons that will stay, and frame to the child’s characteristic.
Like “The Three Little Pigs” fable teaches us to plan our work correctly without taking shortcuts that can damage us and our work.
So children will always remember to not rush in their work, and to be responsible.
Responsibility will form in that child's characteristic, and will be carried on in his life.

Another reason why I think fables can have a positive impact on children because fables teach them lessons that they can face in their life in the future or in their present time.
Like little red riding hood teaches us to never trust strangers. I personally think that is a important lesson that can face children even when they grow up. We should never trust strangers because we don’t know the consequences of it; it can be dangerous to our personal secure or even other peoples secure.
Little red riding hood taught the children what the consequences of trusting strangers can lead to.

and frame the child's character (change what you have)

another change from the adjective "characteristic" to the noun "character."

Paragraph 2 = you need a verb =
"impact on children because" = IS because

Capitalize: Little Red Riding Hood (a character's name)

change "a important" to "an important"

secure is an adjective which you need to change to the noun - security

other people's security (possessive)

Little Red Riding Hood

Sra

Actually, the subject itself is a pet peeve of mine -- the misuse of "if" when "whether" should be used.

<nitpick>
Waxing pedantic, I'd have to say that as written, you'll only be checking "if the grammar is proper." If it's not, you won't check.
</nitpick>

thank you so so much :))))

Can you write an article to be include in the next issue of the magazine?

Overall, your grammar looks good! However, there are a few minor suggestions for improvement:

1. In the sentence "Like 'The Three Little Pigs' fable teaches us to plan our work correctly without taking shortcuts that can damage us and our work," you can make it more concise and clear by saying "Like 'The Three Little Pigs,' this fable teaches us to plan our work correctly without taking shortcuts that can be damaging."

2. In the sentence "So children will always remember to not rush in their work, and to be responsible," you can improve it by saying "So children will always remember not to rush in their work and to be responsible."

3. In the sentence "Responsibility will form in that child's characteristic, and will be carried on in his life," you can make it more gender-neutral by saying "Responsibility will form in the child's characteristics and be carried on in their life."

4. In the sentence "Another reason why I think fables can have a positive impact on children because fables teach them lessons that they can face in their life in the future or in their present time," you can remove the repetition of "fables" and make it more concise by saying "Another reason why I think fables can have a positive impact on children is that they teach lessons that children can apply to their present and future lives."

5. In the sentence "Like little red riding hood teaches us to never trust strangers," you can capitalize "Little Red Riding Hood" as it is the title of a fable.

Other than these suggestions, your grammar is well-written and clear. Good job!