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Homework Help: business ENGlish - Claim letter

Posted by lisa on Friday, November 11, 2011 at 10:57am.

This is the exercise below i'm gonna write my answer: You need to write the Parks Board in your country a request for a refund. You held a family reunion at whitewater park on Saturday at the OAK pavilion which you had reserved for your group at a cost of $100. when the guests arrived, the picnic site was littered with trash. Your family had to spend the first half hour or so of their reunion cleaning up (and some of the trash wasn't that pleasant to handle). plus since some of the trash had been dragged across the picnic tables u had to wipe down them down with makeshift cleaning products before the guests could even sit down. These problems reflected poorly on u, the organizer and detracted from the guest's experience. U figure you deserve some money back (especially since some of ur city tax dollars were spent on maintenance of the parks). write the director, James Nagol, and tell him so.


Dear Mr J.. N...
i'm writing about the unacceptable service experienced by me my family and guests at whitewater park on saturday at the OAK pavilion which i paid for the reservation $100.

when my guests arrived the picnic site was littered with trash. my family had to spend the first half hour of their reunion. also the trash werre dragged across the picnic tables, you had cleaned them with makeshift cleaning product before the guest could sit down.

Due to this facts and because i am a citizen of this city i m aware that some tax dollars are spending on maintenance of the parks lead me to the decision of request for refunds.
Yours faithfully
L... D....

is it Formal?
is it right or need changes please can you state the changes i have to make??

Thank u

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