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Homework Help: English Grade 10

Posted by Stella on Saturday, November 5, 2011 at 5:24pm.

How can I improve my thesis for a comparative essay:

Although both ¡°All is Calm¡± and ¡°The Bicycle¡± portray love and problems between family members, the protagonists in the stories experience drastically different journeys and each learned their own lessons.

I don't especially don't like the part where it says "each learned their own lessons". I don't know how else to put it. I meant like the protagonists each learned different lesson.

Thank you

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