for my comparason essay. now that i have finished every paragraph except the conclusion paragraph.

so far i got:
Miley Cyrus’s argument for how every person is an individual is more compelling than Katy Perry’s argument to just express your self. The message reminds me of a saying”It’s not the destination; it’s the journey.” Life is an uphill battle for most of us.

i need a least 2 more sentence to complete this pragraph, but i do not know what to write.

if you are allowed to refer to yourself in this essay. Tell how these opinions and statements affect you personally, and your life experiences. :) Hope this helps!