February 20, 2017

Homework Help: Opinions wanted

Posted by Finally 14. on Wednesday, November 2, 2011 at 12:37pm.

My book flew across the room as another huge wave crashed against the ship. This was the worst vacation of my my life.

My fairy warned me this wasn't the time for a trip around the world, but did I listen? NOOOO, I was convinced that there was no wrong time too see the world. I was wrong and she was right... as usual. I have got to start listening to that girl!

This is not an assignment but I would appreciate your critique.

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