Posted by Henry2 on Wednesday, November 2, 2011 at 4:09am.
Indeed it would!
Sra
That is a run-on -- two sentences jammed together without correct punctuation to separate them. The word "then" is NOT a conjunction.
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/runons.htm
How will you fix this?
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