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Antigone and Whale Rider
In the play Antigone by Sophocles and movie whale rider directed by Caro. The two characters are Paikea and Antigone both has similarities in common. Both are considered Heros because they go through hardships.
First, Antigone has a conflict with her uncle Creon after her brother’s death, Creon became the king. The conflict between Antigone and Creon was that she wants to bury her brother Polynices, Creon made a law that who buries Polynices will be killed. Antigone fate that she was caught by the guards “the girl was burying him as simple as that” (Sophocles11). This shows us that her uncle was angry and strict and will punish her and there is a conflict between her and Creon. Likewise In the movie whale rider Piakea has a conflict with her grandfather Koro. The conflict was that Piakea was the new chief but her grandfather Koro did not accept her as a chief because girl’s can nott be wise leaders always putting her down and does not want her to join boys school to learn about their traditions and old culture he refuses everything from her. Both the play and the movie are significant because they both have a conflict with a close relative Pia with her Grandfather Koro and Antigone with her uncle Creon they go through hardships.
Secondly, in the play Anitgone was considered a hero in front of Thebes city because she buried her brother Polyncies Antigone has a tragic downfall. Therefore she respected the God’s law, “the people of Thebes do not call it a disease” (19). This shows that people of Thebes think of her that she’s a hero and deserve to live. In the same way, Piakea is considered a hero in front of the village because she saved the whales that where beached at the sea shore, Piakea was the new chief and whale rider. Hence, she saved the whales, she got sick, and put her life in danger and therefore, she is considered a tragic hero. This is significant because both were considered heros and everyone is proud of them in the movie the whale rider Koro told Piakea that she is “wise leader”(Caro) and Antigone had a downfall and was killed .
In Antigone she had people defending her, Ismene and Haemon. When Antigone was caught her sister Ismene was defending her telling Creon that she will die with her sister “to die with you for Polyncies sake?”(14). Haemon was defending Antigone and told his father Creon that she is a hero and the people of Thebes think of her the same “the people of Thebes don’t call it a disease”(19). This clearly shows us that these two people are defending her and loving Antigone. Similarly to the movie her grandmother (Nanny) Flowers were always defending her“when her grandfather saw her at school when they reached home he was angry and her grandmother was defending Piakea and told him that she was watching” (Caro). Therefore, her grandmother is defending her because she loves her and sees her as a hero. This is significant because both have people defending them, and helping to solve their conflicts and hardships.
In conclusion, they both have conflicts with a close relative, two of them considered heros in the eyes of people, and having people defending and helping them to solve their problems. They have tragic downfall in Antigone being killed and Whale rider Piakea puts her life in danger.

I'll deal with the first parts of your paper. Then you need to go through it to find similar errors and fix them.

Antigone and Whale Rider
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In the play Antigone by Sophocles and movie whale rider directed by Caro.
This is a fragment, not a complete sentence. It has no verb. Make it a complete sentence or connect it correctly to the sentence which follows.
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The two characters are Paikea and Antigone both has similarities in common.
This is a run-on (two sentences run together without correct punctuation, etc.) How will you fix this?
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Both are considered Heros because they go through hardships.
Watch spelling and capitalization. You should have "heroes" -- and it would be better to use the word "experience" rather than "go through".

First, Antigone has a conflict with her uncle Creon after her brother’s death, Creon became the king.
Another run-on. How will you fix this?

The conflict between Antigone and Creon was that she wants to bury her brother Polynices, Creon made a law that who buries Polynices will be killed.
Another run-on...

Antigone fate that she was caught by the guards “the girl was burying him as simple as that” (Sophocles11).
You quoted and cited almost correctly; just put a space after Sophocles, before 11. However that is not a complete sentence; it's another fragment. In addition, Antigone is possessive (she 'owns' her fate), and should be Antigone's.
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/possessives.htm

These types of errors are all through your paper. Please go through VERY CAREFULLY and find and fix all of them -- run-ons, fragments, spelling, capitalization, and possessive errors.

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Antigone and Whale Rider
In the play Antigone by Sophocles and the movie Whale Rider directed by Caro, the two characters, Paikea and Antigone, share similarities. Both are considered heroes because they endure hardships.

Firstly, Antigone has a conflict with her uncle Creon after her brother's death. When Creon became king, Antigone wanted to bury her brother Polynices, even though Creon had made a law stating that anyone who buried Polynices would be killed. Antigone was eventually caught by the guards, which demonstrates the anger and strictness of her uncle, and the conflict between them. Similarly, in the movie Whale Rider, Paikea has a conflict with her grandfather Koro. Despite being the new chief, Koro refuses to accept Paikea as a leader due to her gender, constantly putting her down and discouraging her involvement in traditional culture. Both the play and the movie are significant because they portray conflicts with close relatives – Paikea with her grandfather Koro and Antigone with her uncle Creon – while enduring hardships.

Secondly, in the play, Antigone is considered a hero by the people of Thebes because she buried her brother Polynices, even though doing so led to her tragic downfall. She respected the gods' law, which resulted in the people of Thebes seeing her as a hero who deserved to live. Similarly, in the movie Whale Rider, Paikea is considered a hero in her village because she saved beached whales. Being the new chief and the whale rider, Paikea put herself in danger and risked her life to rescue the whales. Therefore, she is seen as a tragic hero. This is significant because both Antigone and Paikea are considered heroes, and the people around them are proud of their actions. In Whale Rider, Koro even acknowledges Paikea as a "wise leader." However, Antigone's story ends tragically with her being killed.

In Antigone, Antigone had people defending her, including her sister Ismene and her lover Haemon. Ismene defended Antigone when she was caught, expressing her willingness to die with her sister. Haemon also argued with his father, Creon, stating that Antigone is a hero and that the people of Thebes share this view. Similarly, in Whale Rider, Paikea's grandmother (Nanny Flowers) always defended her. When Paikea's grandfather saw her at school and got angry, her grandmother defended her actions and explained that she was being watched over. Therefore, her grandmother defended Paikea because she loved and saw her as a hero. This is significant because both Antigone and Paikea have people who support and help them in their conflicts and hardships.

In conclusion, both Antigone and Paikea experience conflicts with close relatives, are seen as heroes by others, and have people defending and assisting them in solving their problems. However, their stories have different outcomes, with Antigone facing a tragic downfall and Paikea putting her life in danger.