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Homework Help: English Sentence correction

Posted by Anonymous on Friday, October 21, 2011 at 6:47pm.

Please help me revise this sentence. The following sentence has many problems in grammar, sentence structure, and words. Correct the sentence:


BEFORE: Cindy met this cool guy last night who helped her when she dropped her cellphone walking through the mall; She defiantly wants to go out with him.

After: When Cindy dropped her cellphone while waking through the mall, she met a cool guy who helped her. She defiantly wants to get to know him better.

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