Homework Help: Poetry

Posted by Izzy on Thursday, October 20, 2011 at 7:19pm.

This is my poem. :P Does it fit into the theme of loneliness?

Loneliness Never Sleeps.
I scream, call for help, my lungs frozen in ice
I can't breathe, I'm alone, my screams don't suffice
My heart pounding hard, wishing someone would hear
I begin to taste my biggest fear
My loneliness; it slithers in like a snake
The effects so grim, it makes fire look fake
Its wicked silhoutte conceals me, being here to stay
My heart, as quick as a mouse, flutters away
As my now empty chest begins to mourn,
I realize happiness must be adjourned
The damage has been done, so I begin to cry
Crystal tears that are never meant to dry.

Poetry - Ms. Sue, Thursday, October 20, 2011 at 7:23pm
Yes, it certainly fits the theme of loneliness.

Who is the author?
Poetry - Izzy, Thursday, October 20, 2011 at 7:25pm
Me. Is it okay?
Poetry - Jahnay, Thursday, October 20, 2011 at 7:33pm
Wow i write poetry and i have to say this is a great poem
Poetry - Izzy, Thursday, October 20, 2011 at 7:34pm
Haha thank you.(:
Poetry - Ms. Sue, Thursday, October 20, 2011 at 7:34pm
It looks great!
Poetry - Izzy, Thursday, October 20, 2011 at 7:35pm
Thank you! :)
Poetry - Jahnay, Thursday, October 20, 2011 at 7:36pm
welcome :)
Poetry - Howler, Saturday, November 12, 2011 at 10:09am
WOW! You are a very good poet!

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