Homework Help: English

Posted by Henry2 on Wednesday, October 19, 2011 at 1:29pm.

Thank you. Could you please check these sentences, please? Thank you.

1) Storm is a participant in the triathlon competition. She is going to reach (I don't know the correct verb) the finishing line. She is wearing a pinkish half zip-up T-shirt with an orange T-shirt under it.
2) She has tracksuit bottoms (I need a synonym) on. She is wearing her hair in a bun/in a pony.
3) Rob is disappointed by his performance because he lost a lot of time on the bike. As a matter of fact, he forgot to bring a map and he took a wrong turning.
4) I'm feeling unhealthy. Try to take care of your health. Rember to make an appointment with the doctor. Go back home and relax.Try to rest (yourself).
Remember to buy a present for her.
He was left in front of a choice.

English - Writeacher, Wednesday, October 19, 2011 at 1:43pm
1) Storm is participating in the triathlon competition. She is going to reach the finish line. She is wearing a pinkish henley shirt with an orange T-shirt under it.

2) She also has tracksuit pants on. She is wearing her hair in a bun/in a pony.

3) Rob is disappointed by his performance because he lost a lot of time on the bike. As a matter of fact, he forgot to bring a map and he took a wrong turn.

4) I'm feeling ill. Try to take care of your health. Remember to make an appointment with the doctor. Go back home and relax. Try to rest.
Remember to buy a present for her.
He was facing a choice between getting flowers or candy for her.

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