posted by Sade C on .
How does this sound for a theses statement?
Healthier Eating habits along with exercise help us maintain a healthy weight and promote remarkable results for our overall health.
It's still all factual.
What is YOUR OPINION about this topic?
Here is an example for you:
Factual: I bought a Honda Civic in 2001.
(not a thesis statement; simply a statement)
Thesis statement: The Honda Civic I bought in 2001 was a very disappointing car.
(the opinion in there is "very disappointing" - now I will spend the rest of the paper explaining why I found the car to be a big disappointment)