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October 20, 2014

Homework Help: English

Posted by Peter on Sunday, October 16, 2011 at 4:45am.

Can anyone check this text and if there are any mistakes, fix it?

I am writing to complain about the advertisement for your new game. I just played the game and then i realised that the advertisement is misleading.

You say there are big cash prizes and averyone can win it. In fact there is only one prize, so only one person can win it. You also say that the game is cheap, but funte 5 for a game is expensive, because not many people can afford it.

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